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Genre and use of conventions
Soft rock, slight narrative, 90% use of artist

Target Audience
Young adolescent (13-15)

Camera Work
Opening tracking shots, direct address camera

Editing
Slow motion, slow fades

Mise en scene
Normal everyday setting suits everyday life. Switching settings good.

Lip synching
Good (but not guitar)

Similarities & influences
The script

Penultimate day

Yeah, we're all screwed. Dan and Matt were well late because they couldn't find a parking space (which means they were DRUNK) and I am too incompitent to even spell the word. I dunno what Sam is doing.

gutted

today i missed the bus and was late for lesson my 34 minutes
bad times

the others are filming out in town
i think they are filming some urban, scenic city shots
theyare going to be filming around some run down places by the Grafton center

They should come out well and hopefully we get get some good lighting on them, so that we dont have to rely on editing the shots to make them look good

the shots will mainly focus on the narrative side of the video.

shots needed to be completed:

Lots more walking down streets, up stairs and meeting people. Standing by walls singing verses.
Particually second n third verse. Stuff on Jesus green. Shots on buses.

Rough Cut

This is our rough cut:

We didnt quite get enough footage, so we were only able to edit it up to the first chorus
However we are quite happy with how some of the shots have turned out.


In future we are looking to get some effects on the shots to make them look more effective, and make them look more like they should be in a professional music video.

Another thing that we need to concentrate on, is getting the lip sinking in time, at times it looks a little bit edgy, and out of time. We need an Istation.

Finally we plan on getting, is some better props, such as a microphone, and a microphone stand, to make it look like he actually preforming to an audience.

Shot List

SHOT LIST

1. Long Shot (showing the whole hall, with Jason standing in the middle of the stage)

2. Close Up (Jason's face on stage)

3. Music kicks in- Middle Shot, looking up at Jason (showing Jason playing guitar)

4. Beginning of verse- Looking up shot , (showing Jason's upper body)

5. Dolly Shot of Jason, when in hall

Outdoorsie bit

1. Tubby clerk being bullied by his boss. Sweeps up leaves deppressed, when Jason Mraz walks past and gives him a coke. Clerk smiles and drinks stead of doing work.

2. Girl having argument with boyfriend, who gives her crap and walks away. Left crying but Jason Mraz cimes sit next to her sings some of verse around her while making her feel better and such and then grabs a passing hunk, who then goes off arm in arm with girl.

3. Person working in office, stressed out at work on computer. Jason Mraz walks past window, reaches in and pulls out plug. Person gives up and goes and does something fun.