Delicious feedback

Genre and use of conventions
Soft rock, slight narrative, 90% use of artist

Target Audience
Young adolescent (13-15)

Camera Work
Opening tracking shots, direct address camera

Editing
Slow motion, slow fades

Mise en scene
Normal everyday setting suits everyday life. Switching settings good.

Lip synching
Good (but not guitar)

Similarities & influences
The script

Penultimate day

Yeah, we're all screwed. Dan and Matt were well late because they couldn't find a parking space (which means they were DRUNK) and I am too incompitent to even spell the word. I dunno what Sam is doing.